Overall the guide is pretty complete. I think somethings could be better clarified. The use of Fracture during straight dungeon runs with multiple mobs isn't something I would recommend. The tank's first and foremost priority is crowd control. Fracture offers no enmity generation, so if you try to put it on all the mobs, you may lose hate. Remember to always follow Provoke with a hate gen skill.
As a new Warrior myself, I found this guide to be well done and gave insight into a lot of my questions as to cross class abilities and what combos is my DPS and what combo is my agro. The only thing that could be done is slightly better formatting. Great job!